First Renders, First thoughts! and Client Feedback!

Here is a first look at the Shot Render!

We tried motion blur the first time round but everything came out very strange and gave us nothing to work with. Although the actually beauty shot came out nice it just wasn't enough for us to work with.

But here is a first composite of the shot. I have recieved some feedback, they like the idea and concept behind the shot as well as the animation. But after talking to them they feel there needs abit of tweaking:

        - Colour grade on last plane: this was my own idea as the back plane looks out of place and strange.
        - odd frame jerk- there seems to be a random frame where the plane jerks. So we need to edit the track for that
        - Play with motion blur- Again something I wanted to take further anyway but its nice to hear the clients also agreeing.

Some other things I want to edit are the ground shadows passed failed to work and the shadows on the plane need abit more to give some more contrast to the actual plane.

I am fairly happy with the first draft but still loads of editing to do.